The Silence Gives Nothing Away

The Silence Gives Nothing Away

A Poem by Nath
"

The silence is the friend in which I have the most faith Because I know for sure that it won't ever give me away.

"
I really dislike these so-called "talks"
Where I ever tell you - nothing at all.
I won't admit anything to noone.
Couldn't you just leave me alone?
~~~~~
Because if you think I would confess,
Admit my failures, admit my weakness
Then you couldn't be expecting less:
Your undertaking will meet no success
~~~~~
For I rather speak to the silence
Because it's such a faithful friend
One that never lies, decieves or betrays:
I know the silence won't give me away
~~~~~
To the silence, I can talk about my problems
With the silence, I can share my many secrets
Fully knowing I can do so without any regrets
Because I know it will keep each one of them
For the silence is an utterly secretive one
The most reticent that I have ever known.
~~~~~
The silence won't ever frustrate my faith,
Won't pass on anything I secretively say
It wouldn't ever put my secrets on display
Because the silence gives nothing away.
~~~

© 2011 Nath


Author's Note

Nath
First and originally posted on Quizilla, 29th of December 2010.
Slightly edited, but not much.
Dedicated to: The silence.
This poem is quite significant, because it marks the end of ... something.
After I published this, I didn't publish anything for about 4 months. Then I broke the silence. But ever since, I haven't really finished much of what I wrote.

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On each work you post you never fail to impress me. The silence does give nothing away but it doesn't give anything back. Trust is a difficult thing when it is put into the wrong person but with the right one it is rewarding. There is sadness underneath as well as if the person wanted to talk but was afraid to. Very nice as usual! :)
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nath

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for your review!
And your analysis is 100 percent correct!
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I really like this poem, it reads really well and you get the emotion across excellently! But you can talk to me you know I wouldn't tell your secrets or anything :) love youuu and wow I haven't been on here in ages!!!!! Take care speak soon hopefully :P xxxxxxx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow, beautiful realistic poem. You're right, sometimes silence can be our best friends.
:)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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