Dying Inside

            

                          I am a pile of bones broken into pieces, lying in the tub as it overflows the water 

                    slowly dripping down to the floor as I take the blade and take it across my wrist, 

                Blood dripping as the water slowly changes dark red overflowing the entire bathroom floor 

            pills rattled over the floor as you slowly can feel yourself overdose ... there's no one here to save 

       you, As your slowly sinking not realizing all of you and your sorrows are completely almost gone and your thinking to yourself "where did it all go wrong?" nobody ever 

knew you were truly dead inside until it was too late for anyone to say goodbye I 

am a pile of bones shattered into pieces ....

             

                  

     

Reviews

[Jibey]

Frightening and moving.. it happens... sadly...

[Pete]

ouch. brutally honest and telling. really leaves a lasting impression. good writing ... :)

[Matthew Kult]

Darkly demented. Surrounded by the color red as we watch the blood drip drip drip.

With love,

Matthew