Where It All Went Wrong

Stuck in a world of pain almost as if the sad days won't go away rain flows
as it's another stormy day almost as if the stormy days will forever stay the same
Almost as if everything she does is just so wrong a woman trying to not feel
like such a disgrace to the people who say they love her to her face but then
judge her as if she's a bad of a person

The people she thought loved her just made her feel as if she would soon lose
control so she started slowly losing hope for everything it seems as if the woman
she was trying to become was somehow going back into that deep dark spot
A place full of darkness anger and pain even shame guilt everything about who
she once was

Lost girl in an abandon world wondering where it all went wrong hoping she can still
try and hold on strong before it's too late and she loses hope she's lost faith and her
way

Reviews

[Jibey]

You capture the confusion and whirl of emotions of the 'lost girl'. This kind needs much love, simply the hand that strokes, the eyes that tell of shared pain, the wordless assurance.

[Anita Frader]

Plenty of emotion in your writing 💛

[UnknownGirl23]

Thank you so much :)

[Anita Frader]

You're welcome :)