Come take me away

Come take me away

A Poem by The other Me

Can you see me?

I’m stuck in this place

With no light, no hope, no serenity

That fear that alone I have to face

Those words that to no one else I can say

It’s killing me inside, so please,

Come take me away


I’m making the same mistakes again

I wish you’d see my pain

I’m living in so many lies

Tears are always in my eyes

I don’t know where I belong

There’s nowhere I can call home for long

I can’t rise above this place, so please,

Come take me away


Turn around and look at me

Can I have your pity?

I’m held up on a breakable thread

I feel like a half dead

Too many wounds that will never heal

It all sounds surreal

You’re the only one who can save me

For there’s no one else I can see

I’m tired, no more can I pray

So please…come and take me away

© 2013 The other Me

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Thank you! means a lot :)

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This is awesome! You have an affinity for rhyming schemes and rhythms. Great job!!!

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2 Reviews
Added on December 23, 2009
Last Updated on March 4, 2013
Tags: come, take, me, away


The other Me
The other Me

Writing down my thoughts, my wishes, my prayers, my dreams... It's just like a very soothing and free therapy. more..

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A Poem by The other Me