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A Poem by The other Me


I pray that I shall never see

A time when you’re away from me
For should our lives be torn apart
I know I’d be without my heart
You are the half that makes me whole
The marrow found within my soul
For me, you are the only one
I hope you’ll be when life is done

The sun shines brighter when you’re near
The sky is blue; no clouds appear
At night, the stars in brilliance show
The happiness I’ve come to know
Though fate may bring a darker day
I pray that love will guide our way
For if you'd go, my heart would cry
Longing for memories passed by

I pray that I shall never view
A moment spent away from you
Your hand is one I long to hold
From this day ‘til we’re very old
My dear, your soul has found a home
From which, I pray you’ll never roam
Please be the rhythm for my rhyme
Until our final sands of time


© 2010 The other Me

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This is so beautiful! The rhythm was perfect, the rhyming was perfect, everything pretty much!! I love 'until our final sands of time'!! FANTASTIC JOB!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Very lovely, I loved the rhythm & rhyme in it. Good work.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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This is very good. The rhyme and rhythm keep the poem going smoothly and they are unfailing. It tells a beautiful love story. Very nice! Keep it up!

Posted 14 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Shelved in 2 Libraries
Added on January 29, 2010
Last Updated on March 21, 2010
Tags: love, together, forever, , i love you


The other Me
The other Me

Writing down my thoughts, my wishes, my prayers, my dreams... It's just like a very soothing and free therapy. more..