Journey of Tears

Journey of Tears

A Poem by Neville
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Journey of Tears

 

The journey of tears

From  

Her eyes to the floor

Was 

Quite simply fraught

With

Sublime deviations

And 

Convoluted detours

In the end though

He just could not take 

Anymore

There were far too

Many

Tantrums and

Lies told by the score ..

 

 

© 2021 Neville


Author's Note

Neville

......................................... you just couldn't make it up, could ya

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I watched from the sidelines as the journey of those tears in slow motion trickled their winding path from their source to the estuary. The deviating wandering path that hesitated, tripped and then fast flowed, and then slowed.

This spoke to me of an unfaithful lover who has been caught out with her deception. Tantrums indeed. At least take it on the chin and act with a bit of dignity.

Lies, are so ugly, particularly when they are being used to deceive.

Fab write. Just fab. You have to slow it down to appreciate it in full.

Chris



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

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... thank you Chris .. slow is good .. I like slow .. dont'cha know ..

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Oh what an end! true, many women use their tears to get what they want because men normally can't see or take a crying woman. this was unexpected dear Neville but very true and from reality.

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Neville

1 Month Ago


I gave up carrying a spare handkerchief some time ago when I became appropriately enlightene.. read more
very pretty poem! I loved it!

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Neville

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How very bloomin kind, cheers TeeMarie91 ... Neville :)
Drama gets really old...lived through that in one relationship....so uneven that I became nearly crazy.

you depict it so well here, Neville...

the calm times come far from balancing the emotions.
j.

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Neville

1 Month Ago


thank you so much for stopping by and checking in jacob ..
N.
I watched from the sidelines as the journey of those tears in slow motion trickled their winding path from their source to the estuary. The deviating wandering path that hesitated, tripped and then fast flowed, and then slowed.

This spoke to me of an unfaithful lover who has been caught out with her deception. Tantrums indeed. At least take it on the chin and act with a bit of dignity.

Lies, are so ugly, particularly when they are being used to deceive.

Fab write. Just fab. You have to slow it down to appreciate it in full.

Chris



Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Month Ago


... thank you Chris .. slow is good .. I like slow .. dont'cha know ..

Nevill.. read more

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