Excuse Me I Love You She Said

Excuse Me I Love You She Said

A Poem by Neville

Excuse Me I Love You She Said

 


Excuse me, I love you she said


but pray treat me gentle ..

 


I may not be fragile or precious


in the classical sense ..

 


Yet I can be awfully dangerous


when frightened, abused or provoked ..

© 2022 Neville


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Dear Neville, this is what you call laying your cards on the table. She loves you, but there comes a warning with it. . Don't rock the boat. Don't make her feel any of those things stated in the final line or you could be in big trouble. Only a fool would test the water :) I think she was being very honest. A gentleman wouldn't make a woman feel frightened, abused or provoked. She should have been in safe hands.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Snap :) she would, almost certainly have been Chris .. Cheers.

Neville
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I do not think this lady is to be trifled with. Cross her at your own peril.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Say no more JtB.. consider it not done sir :)
Is this woman related to Steve Martin? Anyway, I don't know what to think about a woman who starts with Excuse me I love you. It's just so weird that I keep going back to it. Neat idea.

Winston

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Yes ......... that'll do just nicely .. Cheers Winston :)
woe the man who fails to heed this cautionary/ominous warning

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


woe indeed ............ cheers Ken :)
Dear Neville, this is what you call laying your cards on the table. She loves you, but there comes a warning with it. . Don't rock the boat. Don't make her feel any of those things stated in the final line or you could be in big trouble. Only a fool would test the water :) I think she was being very honest. A gentleman wouldn't make a woman feel frightened, abused or provoked. She should have been in safe hands.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

1 Year Ago


Snap :) she would, almost certainly have been Chris .. Cheers.

Neville
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Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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