Whispers

This one just came to me one night

 

The dark whispers to me and says beautiful things.
It shadows my joys and fears
and speaks to me through all my tears.
It beckons me to come and shy away from my loved ones.
I listen to its promises as I lie awake at night,
hoping to hear its dreams for me to help me choose my side.
I can't decide to go,
or stay around this side I so well know.
When the dark whispers in my ears it makes me feel so secure.
I better choose soon,
before it passes me and goes on to you.

Reviews

[Wildecat]

Very well crafted poem, kind or on the dark and mystic side, I liked it. Well done.

[JRB]

a dark side shown,nice write,
Jan/uisiom

[kollaboratyve]

Stylish,and mystic. It puts you in the poem.and walks you through the event. It works for me. Your thought progression is fresh and relaxing. Good write!!!!!!

[Raven Malak]

For me The Dark Is That Little Voice Pushing, Tempting you on for that one last Cut.

The dark always knows what it is that you want. It says it will give you everything, But it takes form you more.

Keep it up.

[FoolsGold23]

Wow, I did sooo enjoy this one!! The feelings you imbue the speaker with about the darkness are touching and tender! Great Job!!

[EnterUSerName]

Hmm.. I like the flow,
Of unknowing..the temptation to heed to the darkness cries,
never knowing until the very moment what you'll do.