I won't surrender

I won’t surrender
I’m not insane
I won’t lose
Because of a bit of pain

 

I won’t lose my image
I won’t lose my pride
My image is who I am
But bruises I can hide

 

I won’t surrender
The pain will go away
I won’t lose
My image needs to stay

 

I won’t surrender
I’m not insane
I won’t lose
Because of a bit of pain

Author's Note

Made after a friendly 'fight' between my best male friend and I =).

Reviews

[ashley]

Another great poem! I love this. :D

[lrigD]

If I'd have to choose, I'd say this is my favourite poem of yours. The rhyming is natural and strengthens the message rather than making it seem forced. My only wish is that it should be longer!