Disinterested

Disinterested

 

I skip from your internet poetry

To the guns for sale page

Intent on acquiring

Just a moment

Of your

Time

One way or another be sure

I shall eventually succeed

Are you interested

now

?

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Sharp, like an arrow head. That's what the shape of your lines look like to me even though we are talking guns here. Whatever, this old poem certainly concentrates the mind. A most pointed little write with some cynic thrown in for added measure. Good morning Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

Barbed & to the point does it for me.. Thank you Chris & Good Afternoon to you.

Neville

[Einstein Noodle]

Damn Neville!!! I'm scared now for sure you terrorist you! glad we're not dating :))))))))))))))) i love this poem..big time...its sharp commentary on nightmare dates and more that happen all the time ... all around the world ... murderers .. scammers ... liars and cheats ... all bundled up on line .. your back to back pages with guns-n-dating is so poignant ... my daughters are all grown up and so not dating and I could not be more relieved for that ..i think every computer should have this poem pop up on start up ... powerful sir! satirical edge is perfect ... did i say i like this one a lot?? ;)
E.

[Neville]

thanks a bundle squire.. a big bundle at that.. I only fire blanks these days... but lots of em.... Glad my daughters hooked up too, I can tell ya :)))) Neville

[HadesRising]

Very solid sleek Sharp polished piece. Well Done

[Neville]

that will do nicely .. thank you

[Patricia Wedel]

It works... reminds me of the sign outside an old two-story home
in the country side... that reads: "This house guarded by a Shot Gun
three days a week. You decide which three. Amen

[Neville]

my word... how I wish I had thought of that...... bless ya Pat and true...................... Neville

[Robin]

perception and focus ...

[Neville]

Two qualities I admire in all artists whatever their genre and of course their critics and admirers too, thank you Robin, N

[Circe]

that definitely grabs attention, clever piece Neville!

[Neville]

Thank you Circe, I do kind of agree and am pleasantly shocked by the reponses to date, although the most recent tragedy in the US is still very raw though and we should never forget the unforgiveable destruction of innocence & innocents. AGT's N

[Circe]

I agree.. those tragedies are a huge loss for humanity

[Neville]

Huge is small in comparison since everything is relative but I think I know exactly what you mean. I'm off to bed as up early to light the fire and pretend to my 30 & 21 year old kids that Santa has been, AGT's Circe, N

[Circe]

ahahaha sounds excellent... merry christmas to you and yours :)

[Neville]

Every single sentiment reciprocated my dear Circe & I hope you find something extra special in your stocking when you wake up on Christmas morning. All Gooooood Things, Your friend Neville

[Circe]

haha stocking!! you're funny, it is christmas morning, hope you'll have a great one Neville! :D

[Neville]

We are just starting to prepare Christmas dinner, hope you got everything you wished for, N

[Circe]

that's splendid! enjoy your feast :)

[Neville]

You too

[Frieda P]

BANG, that packs a punch of lethal ammunition!

[Neville]

Ha Ha got you interested then, thank you Frieda P. All Good Things, neville P

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Nev as always profound and a joy to read!