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A Poem by Neville
"

Another one word liner straight down the page

"

Oh

How

I

Wish

I

 Was

 Wrong

 

Just

Take

 The

 Words 

From

 This

 Song 

 

Then

Take

 The

 Gra

From

 The

 Grail

 

And

Take

 The

 Wind

From

 My

 Sail

 

Oh

How

 I

 Wish

I

 Was

 Wrong

 

But

 As

 Always

I

 Am

 Write

 

© 2014 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the dialogue, etc.

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i like it .. i enjoyed the humor .. simplicity .. expressions of pain and irony .. i like it!
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

I am then fulfilled from a literary point of view ... Many thanks, E. N from N
Grammar problems? What grammar problems? It just needs a title. And makes everyone think, what is he "write" about?

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Hey Kitty, I will keep on righting then, cheers, N x
interesting subject in these simply words

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

That is precisely what they are Edward, simply words... Sounds like a good title for a poem dontcha .. read more
Nice play on words there at the end, "I am Write" yes, you are, Neville! You have rhymed just right in this one and I liked the one word lines. The succinctness of each line gave each word more meaning and made it more enjoyable. Lydi**

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

9 Years Ago

Bless you my dear Lydi. As always, your time and opinion mean a great deal to me. Many best wishes a.. read more
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Neville

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