Orchid

Orchid

Like

An

Orchid

In

A

Storm

.

You

Are

Bruised

And

You

Are

Torn

.

You

Are

No

Longer

Beautiful

.

Reviews

[John Ciarmello]

I loved this Neville! The structure set like the Orchid is a great touch! Best Wishes

[Neville]

Thank you so very much, N

[Cherrie Palmer]

the ability to express a feeling shows talent, but the writer who can create a feeling in others is a poet indeed. :)

[Neville]

If its all the same to you my friend, I will take that as a compliment. Please correct me if I happen to be wrong. All Good Things regardless.......N

[Cherrie Palmer]

this was meant as a compliment for sure.

[Neville]

I am a very happy...............N

[Mrudula Rani]

The storm weathered orchard may be broken and not as beautiful as before... but it still has life! Where there is life there is hope!

[Neville]

How very true, thank you dear friend....N

[Mrudula Rani]

It is always my pleasure!

[barleygirl]

This seems harsh, but I like honesty & I very much relate to your straightforward message. I've had many blessings thru-out most of my life, but recently my life & my body have been severely broken, so this is how it seemed for a few years. Now I realize being beautiful like an orchid is nowhere near as satisfying as being beautiful like a dirt clod *smile* (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Bless ya Margie.........Neville

[JustNonsenseAndSugar]

This made me sad And I don't know really why. Despite the simplicity of your words, it was filled with emotion and thought.

[Neville]

I guess I kinda succeeded then. Why not read another and who knows, it might just make you feel happy. No guarantees though. Only kidding, thanks for considering my words. All Good Things, Neville