A Silent Refrain

A Silent Refrain

A Poem by Neville
"

when silence says it all

"

A Silent Refrain

 

It would be so

Very easy to

Just let go and fall

In love with her

 

It would be

Far harder to refrain

Come tell me what

You know my darling

 

Of all those things

We do call

Love and pain

My world is full of them

 

How very cat like

Of you Kitten

Come teach me of poverty

And hard times romantic

 

 

 

 


© 2019 Neville


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This is quite lovely and I read it several times. Could be interpreted on several different levels, but I didn't see a cat in sight, only terms of endearment. Silence is not a good communicator although silence is certainly golden at the right moments and used effectively.
I like my interpretation very much.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

Impressed with the effort.
Neville

5 Months Ago

it would not be the first time
Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

Even more impressive :)



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As easy as it is hard -- there is so much in between the lines the cat can paw at between the cracks.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Months Ago

oh believe me.. I feel that I have been well and truly mauled.... paw me eh' ........ thank you Lyn... read more
You could never fall in love with me Nev and you would not want to know the things I know. So I'll just sit here silently reading all the thoughts within your words :) lol

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Months Ago

sounds like a plan
The times my refraining should of been refrained... but then again should it of been... I will never know to my disdain! Boom words you pose in these few lines a novel, It is your talent to do so. Its just that some times the refrain is as delicious as refraining Nev's and Bunny's are fools tools

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

5 Months Ago

The Bunny's spot on.. aint we just... too bad eh & thanks a million.... N
This is quite lovely and I read it several times. Could be interpreted on several different levels, but I didn't see a cat in sight, only terms of endearment. Silence is not a good communicator although silence is certainly golden at the right moments and used effectively.
I like my interpretation very much.

Chris

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

Impressed with the effort.
Neville

5 Months Ago

it would not be the first time
Christine Anne Shaw

5 Months Ago

Even more impressive :)
I love this message! Sometimes the best things are left unsaid, but you still manage to find words & then you make it sound as fulsome as silence (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

6 Months Ago

thank you Margie my friend..and muchly meant.. words written for a cat I once thought I knew... N
barleygirl

6 Months Ago

I wanted to say: this is why I've always lived with pets (they don't talk) . . . now that you tell m.. read more
Neville

5 Months Ago

.......... purrfect :)

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