Just Another Murmeration

Just Another Murmeration

A Poem by Neville
"

well fancy that... another fleeting flight of fancy...

"

Just Another Murmeration

 

Barely a moment beautiful

A flurry of ups and downs

 

Hardly time for a smile to form

And feet never touching the ground

 

Its either love, my love or maybe

Just another one of them murmerations…

 

© 2020 Neville


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It's love when it's murmurations. They are fascinating to watch. Can hold you spellbound at the swift movement and sudden change of direction. Magnetic. Wonderful to watch starlings, but also I like watching schools of fish. They act in the same way. It's never just another murmuration Neville. Each one can't help but uplift you. They may not last long, they are fleeting, but they are very memorable. They also make good poems.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago

Thank you our Chris for your insight and understanding … I like watching fish too by the way... bu.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Ha!, Well the postman should deliver early. In fact later today :)
Neville

3 Years Ago


good to hear..



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Well Neville, if all the world was flat and bumpless, we'd soon grow boredof looking at the horizon. To be safe, take a couple of tums, and check back in an hour. If you're still thinking about her, then I'm afraid it's the L word for you.
I've heard tell of it almost always being fatal, but head up lad, night just be indigestion 😀

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


now I'm confused.. was told to take the pills four times a day, a double dose at night and t.. read more
Lorry

3 Years Ago

Wire brush and dettol... The military cure 😀
Neville

3 Years Ago


when I was in the RAF.. we were told to use zambuk
my mind is a constant flow of murmur, sometimes it's a melody and other times its a muddle, but a magnetic murmur... well that's the best kind:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


a most magnificent mumble Robert and it came across both loud and clear.. maybe its the ions.. read more
Robert Trakofler

3 Years Ago

I take it :) nobody but us has to know LOL
Neville

3 Years Ago


you bet'cha just make sure the missus aint lookin :)
It's clear you know a thing or two about the birds and the bees.
I don't know what it is but I like the poem.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


You got me buzzin big time Ana … cheers :)
Ana Papaya

3 Years Ago

Cheers, my friend. :)
I like it. I like the word. To flock or not to flock, if that is the question. Oh well, I say, flock it. And I hope this review at least brought that smile the in-flight pattern had reserved for the landing. Wonderful experimentation.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


I am indeed smiling sir.. big time and thank you for facilitating the upward rise of the cor.. read more
Murmeration...in itself is a beautiful word I’m learning here.And how you used it here conveys many thoughts.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


Thank you kindly my friend.. they are like our tools aren't they words that is...
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AJNJ

3 Years Ago

Yes. I'm in love with them. Hope the affair lasts this season of isolation :)
You're most we.. read more
Neville

3 Years Ago


and longer yet & back at thee :)
we can bounce back from murmurations more easily than broken love.
Maybe it's better to have "fleeting" which is less beating (up) of the heart.
just a quicker pulse rate for awhile.
j.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago


Hey, I reckon you got something there Jacob... who needs a gym after all... Thank you kindly.. read more
It's love when it's murmurations. They are fascinating to watch. Can hold you spellbound at the swift movement and sudden change of direction. Magnetic. Wonderful to watch starlings, but also I like watching schools of fish. They act in the same way. It's never just another murmuration Neville. Each one can't help but uplift you. They may not last long, they are fleeting, but they are very memorable. They also make good poems.

Chris

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

3 Years Ago

Thank you our Chris for your insight and understanding … I like watching fish too by the way... bu.. read more
Chris Shaw

3 Years Ago

Ha!, Well the postman should deliver early. In fact later today :)
Neville

3 Years Ago


good to hear..

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