Another South West Coastal Path Miracle

Another South West Coastal Path Miracle

A Poem by Neville

Another South West Coastal Path Miracle

 


Was it some bizarre coincidence perhaps


he happened to stumble upon those


same tiny blue flowers, three days in a row



You surely know the ones I mean, yes those


that always seem to grow


so damn close to the edge like that ..



 Well it was there, he recalled she sometimes wore


those same blue flowers in her hair


and in that moment, he just knew he had to go on



So he picked himself up and brushed himself down


making sure to get rid of the dust from


his old canvass shoes and the green corduroy jacket



Yes, the same one she bought him all those years ago


then had a good look around, and low and behold,


there beside the empty shells of discarded plovers eggs



In a tiny scraped hollow, somewhere high on the coastal path


close to where they once loved and lived ..


He found the missing half of her old broken gold cross ..



 

 

 

 

© 2022 Neville


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Very much like a story..
Liked it and was quite surprised by the ending.
Actually thought that you were going to find those tiny blue flowers....
Lisa

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Years Ago


thank you Lisa I am delighted my friend .. and as a matter of fact, those tiny blue feathers.. read more
Lisasview

2 Years Ago

Are they flowers or feathers..Did I miss something..
You are most welcome.
Lisa
Neville

2 Years Ago


I dont think you missed anything Lisa .. they were flowers, tiny blue ones & very pretty my .. read more

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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