A Scatter of Moments

.. they dont come around that often, but when they do .. dont ya just know it and love em ..

A Scatter of Moments

 

She was far more than a scatter of moments

a series of

breath-taking dreams ..

Part familiar

yet somehow remaining distant and torn

along the line

of some f*****g invisible seam ..

She was stillness and silent, a sparkle a glint ..

She was the scent

of wild flowers, of rivers and streams ..

Yes indeed,

she was a scatter of moments, a calm soothing

balm on a hot summer day

She was a lover

a stranger an enigma a friend ..

She was wholesome, yet broken, a cool mist

and a promise

at the end of a very long day ..

Yes, my love was more than a scatter of moments by far ..

 

 

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

She was a promise at the end of a very long day. That line says a great deal to me. The she here is a mystery, you never quite know what you are going to get. That can be exciting and keep you on your toes. She is like the elements, changeable, a person of contrasts. This is beautifully romantic, an enjoyable read Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

thank you our Chris .. I know, I can be a very norty boy at times ........... but hey, keep it to yourself eh' :)

[Chris Shaw]

Hush............ :)

[Inessa]

A rather romantic poem, Neville. If your love consists of all these particles then she is much more than a scattering of moments. Though, we females can be quite scattered at the best of times! She sounds like a woman of contrasts and one to love and handle delicately. Handle with care, as the box stickers always say. ❤

[Neville]

what an insightful and likewise, much appreciated visit .. thank you kindly Inessa .. Neville ❤