New Prints in Old Dust

New Prints in Old Dust

She was working her way through

each moment

that squeezed slow and made up

her new day ..

She was smiling and dancing and

otherwise

bravely and happily playing away ..

No doubt it was

a dangerous game, but one she

felt more than

compelled and willing to play ..

Just watching

and waiting for a new set of prints

left in old dust to

pave and then to show her the way ..

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Just watching and waiting until the time was right, I would say. Compelled is a strong word with direction. The dust had settled. Good morning Neville.

Chris

[Neville]

I like the cut of your jib mistress Chris .. thank you n truly :)

[Aura]

This sounds like she's been there, done that yet she's coming back to play the same game with a new twist. Interesting poem and at first, the title " New prints in Old Dust" made ms think of news papers for some reason :) Thanks for sharing!

[Neville]

my word, although a true gentleman never tells, you my friend have an extraordinarily good eye ..thank you kindly and true my friend ... Neville :)

[Aura]

You are most welcome :)