A Feeling Found On a Hillside in Rio

A Feeling Found On a Hillside in Rio

A Poem by Neville
"

No bull .. the whole thing is true ..

"

A Feeling Found On a Hillside in Rio


 

When we climbed


down into


the great pyramid


at Giza


it was really like


something

   

else now, wasn’t it ..


And then,


to the very top

   

of Sigiriya, like wow ..


But there


can be no doubt we


all came


closest to the son of


   our maker ..


When we found him


and felt Christ,

   

on some hillside in Rio ..



 

© 2024 Neville


Author's Note

Neville
it's hard to describe, but I know what I felt and when and where that I felt it ..

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Amazing. Grace… how sweet the Sound… softly, Pat

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

2 Months Ago


Thank you Pat .. and kindly .. Neville

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Neville
Neville

Gone West folks....., United Kingdom



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