Right Here and Now

I just finished this song yesterday. I hope you enjoy it. Please comment on things I should add or take off.

Right now, I gotta let my pain out.

Right now, I gotta run, scream and shout....

I throw my head in the air,

Running like I don't care...

Going slowly insane,

In this place so broken.

I let my past control me,

Got pushed to the sideline.

With nothing, nothing to do,

But let it control me.

But why?

Why did I let it win?

Was it something I did,

Too many mistakes that I let in.

Got thrown off the path,

Now you need to face my wrath.

Right now, I gotta learn to shut my mouth.

Right now, I let my life go south.

I throw my head in the air,

Running like I don't care...

Going slowly insane,

In this place so broken.

But why?

Why do you hate me?

Is it something I did to make you mad?

You throw me to the ground,

I lay there scattered and battered.

Then you left me for dead.

Right here, I gotta let my rage out.

This song, is the only way I know how.

I throw my head in the air,

Running like I don't care...

Going slowly insane,

In this place so broken.

Reviews

[child of God]

Well I don't think you should take anything of it Dan this is wonderful a song that I won't mind hear played thank you for sharing my freind a pleasure to read

[Daniel Whitaker]

Thank you Broken Girl. My life's been tough lately

[child of God]

It is ok if you want to talk about it I'm hear for you just email me or talk about or talk about it in the group

[Daniel Whitaker]

It's on group

[child of God]

Ok I'm here for you freind