Another unnamed

Simplistic.

One day,

       One life,

His pain,

     Her knife,

One cut,

       One noise,

His life's her toys,

        No care,

No shame,

     No thought,

His pain,

      One moment,

Can't stop,

        That minute,

She's lost,

        No wants,

No needs,

     No shame,

He breathes,

     What's next,

Who knows,

       Don't worry,

Lets go. 

Reviews

[FuMiko]

A simplistic, though powerful poem. I loved it, I really did. Ordinarily, I try to be constructive, but I couldn't find any flaws. This is a great write, and thank you for sharing!