Truth

I look at the sky
The birds and trees
And i wonder why it is me
Why would I lose his love
Why would he leave me here

You promised me forever
You promised me
I hate you now
But I need you
Dont leave me, love me

I will give you everything

Reviews

[James D Storrington]

I think you're a good writer. The problem that I always had was never allowing people form outside my family, and friends to actually read my writing. Until recently. If you're only as good as your last review.... then please take this into account.
I think that most people at some point in their lives feel this way. I also think that you have tackled this subject very well. You can feel the emotion in the poem also. This is a nicely written piece. Well done! Keep writing!
Kindest regards, ~ Ds
Remember..... Dare to dream!!