Where Does It Go...?

Where Does It Go...?

A Poem by Nicole
"

The inevitable.

"

 

Lollipop's turn Into cigarettes. The innocent ones turn into s***s. Soda becomes Vodka. Bikes become cars. Undies turn into g-strings. Remember when getting high, meant swinging on the playground? When protection meant, wearing a helmet? when the worst things you could get from boys were cooties? Race issue's were about who ran the fastest. War was only a card game. The only drug you knew was cough medicine. The only things that hurt you,were skinned knees. And goodbyes only meant until tomorrow.
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 And we all couldn't wait to grow up.

 

© 2009 Nicole


Author's Note

Nicole
Hmm..

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this is really good. and its sooo true.

Posted 14 Years Ago


awes. ^_^
I love this. For about half a minute I was in first grade again.
Well, my first grade experience wasn't so great,
But this is how I have always imagined it.
It really speaks on the world, and how it changed,
And above all, it's true.
Outstanding=)

Posted 14 Years Ago


amazing - love this
makes you think

Posted 14 Years Ago


i have nothing to say except, awesome.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yeah i know exactly where you are coming from in relation to these issues, you are so right on there and have hit the nail on the head with this wonderful piece.
I am affraid the age of innocence has long gone now we live in the age of crime,grime and slime and nothing not even human life seems to have any value we are being consummerised by the nasty media and marketing world.
Politicians don't set us a great example and our role models set the the young and aspiring generation impossible targets to emulate.Well done on a fantastic write.

Posted 14 Years Ago


And we like to think we are an
advenced nation !

You said it like it is so there is
nothing one can add.

Perfect !

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is way good!!!!!!!!!!!
makes you think..
love it :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love this, it's so saddd (which means it's good)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dude, I f*****g love this.
It pretty much defines most . XD

And I like how witty this is.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My full name is Nicolette Garmini Elise Ramsingh. I'm a proud person, sure some of the things I do may be bad. Maybe even stupid but, hey. Its my life. :) I love my friends to death. And I'm just .. more..

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