The Maple Tree

I’ve been thinking
You and me
Maybe we should meet
At the maple tree
Share some secrets
Two or three
Find out more about you
Find out more about me

I’ve been thinking
You and me
Maybe we should start
A family
Have some kids
Two or three
I bet we’ll both
Be real happy

I’ve been thinking
You and me
We should take a break
From reality
You work all week
No time to spend with me
Come on, take my hand
I’ll break you free

Now, I’ve been thinking
For an eternity
We used to be young
Future too far to see
Now, don’t cry
Now, don’t weep
I’ll still be here
I’ll always be

At our place
Under the maple tree.

Reviews

[Wild Rose]

If only it was so easy
we met made love
The years have passed
we are sit sitting under our Maple Tree
other friends have left never to sit under the Maple Tree again

[Lo]

Oh wow this is really good! Have you ever thought about turning it into a song, not just a poem? The message here is brilliant! Keep up the amazing work!

[Nicole]

Tysm!!!!! Ive always thought my poems were trash but tysm i really appreciate the feedback

[Lo]

Trash?!?? No way! This is amazing!

[Nicole]

Lol I don’t like having too much confidence in myself, ignore my stubborn self, but anyways tysm i genuinely appreciate ur support :’) also sorry if i sound sarcastic-

[Lo]

Wow u really are just like me huh? No confidence, always sarcastic that u actually have to tell ppl that ur being sarcastic... etc. etc.

[Nicole]

Lmao i guess i am like u, I just feel Iike.. ya know?

[Lo]

Lol yes the best mood: ...ya know?

[Nicole]

Lmfaoo yes

[Lo]

I swear I need ur number

[Nicole]

If only i had one.. strict parents ya know :’d

[Lo]

*visible sadness*

[Nicole]

*sigh* welcome to the life of a Nicole