At Your Side

Senryu

 

 

Whisper in my ear;

I'll be here for you even

When the light is gone.

Reviews

[Zackery Alan Daley]

People mistake Haiku for simplicity, when it actually takes as much thought as writing a sonnet or another syllable related poetic ensamble. I love this "little" poem. 5-7-5. Perfect Haiku, proper publication, and beauty being described in terms of sadness. "Simply" brilliant. Bravo, and way to win the contest.

[smiggle wiggle]

lol. I don't really like haikus only because there are rules with the syllables and stuff. I don't like poetry with rules. That's why I prefer freeverse. But the poem is great! I loved it! Great job and keep writing!

[DarkAngelWriter]

This made me cry... Me and a friend of mine are going through this right this second. He's freaking out because he thinks he'll die alone. I told him I loved him and that I'd never let that happen... Great write, Nicole.

[*~Poetic_Essence~*]

I enjoyed this even though i you say there is a mistake..i love the picture up there as well..it ties the haiku together by placing a visual..i love it..short, sweet, and to the point..i enjoyed the read..
Well From One Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Oooh, I feel tingles. "Whisper in my ear"... I don't know why, but that sounds so sensual. Anyways, awesome haiku! I like the meaning behind it. It's just so deep. :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Marie]

Middle line had an extra syllable. Excellent despite that!

[Belle Morte]

I love Haikus. It's short, simple, and to the point. Very good job.

[Nicholas Hallows]

A very good poem, although one too many syllables in the middle line to be classed as a haiku I think.
NH

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

a very good and meaningful Haiku. Wonderful :)

[JC Fox]

short simple and very sweet good job