Who I Am

The picture of my eye inspired me..

 

A writer.

A photographer.

An expressive artist.

I am a girl with a dream.

And I only have a few words

To prove to you that I'm just

As better as the rest of them.  

Now that I’ve gotten that aside,

I’m a girl with a burning passion

That will never die from her bondage.

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Author's Note

The picture I used is an actual picture of my eye. I just made it colorful on Photoshop! :D I decided to experiment with the size of the font from smaller to bigger. I hope it's not annoying...

Reviews

[Belle Morte]

I agree with Brenda Sue, that one line is a little off. Other than that, this is a fantastic peice. I really loved it. Thank you for sending this to me love. Keep up the wonderful work! :)

[JC Fox]

That was actually an interesting concept with going from small to large, Great poem!

[Blade & Blood (The ..]

Not annoying, at all! :) This is an awesome poem. ^^ Great job and thanks for sharing! This is a very powerful piece, in my opinion.

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

awsome poem... fantastically written

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Original and unique, I think the smaller to the bigger really adds to the piece. This one line seems off a little; I'm just as better as the rest of them. But this piece is wonderfully penned and a great job.