Going with Love

Going with Love

A Poem by Nicole Renee

You 
And I 
Will pay with 
Our smiles on 
This wonderful day, laughing and crying
With happiness,staring at each other 
With the future 
In our eyes 
And much 
Love

© 2010 Nicole Renee


Author's Note

Nicole Renee
Inspired by You and I by Ingrid Michaelson. :]


STRUCTURE OF TETRACTYS:

Twenty Syllables Per Verse

line 1 ~ One
line 2 ~ Two
line 3 ~ Three
line 4 ~ Four
line 5 ~ Ten

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very sweet:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very sweet! I liked it, and I like that style of writing too. The poem is not only good, it looks good on 'paper'. Kudos! =^-^=

Posted 10 Years Ago


this is a wonderful write

Posted 11 Years Ago


Congratulations for winning the tetractys contest!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it..you're awesome :)..even though is short is very powerful..good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow this is beautifully written. tetracty is one of my fav style of poetry. you did flawless with it. keep up the great work :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I just adore this form of poetry.
Always a pleasure to read your entries!
This is inspirational. Thank You !

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Nicole Renee
Nicole Renee

Anoka, MN



About
I usually write poetry and short stories, yet I always come up with good ideas for novels. I did have a long biography on here,but when Charlie deleted everybody's work off of here on Friday the 13th,.. more..

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