SNAP

This doesn't have a very even flow to it and I understand if you struggle with it. But please give me feedback?

There is this boy I know and his heart is filled with sorrow. It breaks my own to know that there's nothing I can do to help him rid of this pain he feels and it is the worst feeling ever.

People say that heartbreak is the worst but I tell you that there is nothing worse than watching the one you love crumble because of sadness filling them to the brim. 

Watching as their eyes fill up, tear by tear and needing to allow them their outlet in fear of them going that step further. In fear of them breaking.

Hoping that if you give them their release they will feel better but it just makes them feel worse and you feel the weight of the blame upon your shoulders.

Because if you hadn't just looked away and let them harm themselves in the most brutal of ways then maybe they wouldn't be hurting as bad as they are right now.

And this results in you hurting yourself because the stress gets overwhelming and you just SNAP and that's when you break down and cry your eyes out in the middle of the night.

You sit up and browse through Facebook, looking at posts that you have already seen to prevent you from hurting yourself further but eventually the call of the blade is too much and you break down and grab it.

Before you know it you're bleeding and you have to clean it, to prevent anyone from knowing.

Fearing they will label you as being weak.

This boy that I know doesn't deserve this sadness that fills his heart.

Author's Note

Ignore any grammar. But please, give me feedback as I know this isn't the best. I apologise for that!

Reviews

[generic twat]

Pretty damn good, baby, told you that you could write poetry!

[Nicole]

Not really...I don't even know what this is. I don't think it's a poem. But thankyou, honey

[generic twat]

It's a poem and I like it c:

[Nicole]

Do you really?

[generic twat]

I really do c:

[Nicole]

Is the name appropriate...? I wasn't sure about it but I kinda liked it too

[generic twat]

Yeah, I'd say so c: