TIME IMMEMORIAL

Tribute to the former times.

The days gone by,
were the golden days.
Days when laughing at one's own jokes was routine.
Days when midday meal was over by 10.
Days when a single tiffin box being shared by an entire majority was typic.
Days when the examination seemed a cakewalk but the results were never acclamatory.

And those were the days,
when we first met
when our worlds collided.
When accidently but auspiciously,
my sky vowed to give colour to your ocean.
When unwittingly but opportunely,
i promised to be your sun
letting you scatter every quantum of my shimmer.
This radiance, being my possession
illuminated your world.
You, the moon,
shone so bright.
They called this glint the "moonshine"
I never explained it was all mine.

Author's Note

I hope you like it :)

Reviews

[Mufeen]

A gud one...
Back to school days... #nostalgic

[Shah Sabia]

Thankyou.

[Mufeen]

Bdw last lines kiskay liye ? :p

[Shah Sabia]

Just aise hi likhi :)

[Mufeen]

Ghum sum writer oye :p

[AE]

Wow, that was really well written, but maybe you should play with the formatting a bit more. Syntax has an effect. I mean just the first two lines got me. "The days gone by, Were the golden days." Just adding the comma at the end of that first line made the second line seem just a little more hesitant and more precious to the narrator. If you could keep that same nostalgic feeling going on through the use of simple punctuation and positioning, then that'd make it even better.

[Shah Sabia]

Thankyou, i'll surely keep that in mind :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, i like it, its lovely. brilliant write. 100 points.

[Shah Sabia]

Thankyou so much :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You're welcome :)