Her Secret Garden

I entered her secret garden to touch, taste, and smell.
To revel in color's wonders, wares, and wiles.
Her secret garden called my name in whispered yells.
She opened it to me.
Allowed me inside.
Told me to delight in all its shine.
To touch the new blooms that I had cultivated.
To water the new seedlings I had planted.
To hoe the soil of her soul,
To fertilize the new way of her secret garden.
To nurture a more fruitful harvest of beauty
and sustenance.
Her secret garden has weeds to eradicate.
I'll not use poisons, nor gnashing blades.
I shall plant vigorous, beautiful plants
To slowly choke those weeds that steal beauty
and pilfer her confidence.
Her secret garden is now mine.
To task I have set.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

descriptions abdundant
erotic just enough
beautiful words and meanings loved it all

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you so much!

[KWP]

The good thing about secret gardens is sometimes they need tender pickings and other times they need a good lot of work put into them to receive desired results :D

[Nipplegrinder]

Truly, my friend. ;)

[Lyn Anderson]

A very sensual and loving write - to choke the things that steal her confidence - oh that all loves were this

[Nipplegrinder]

Thank you so much, Lyn. I try.

[Alexa Apothic Red]

Oh my word! This is both beautiful and fiery erotic in all that I imagined in those new blooms you cultivated.. and planting vigorous plants in her? Hot! And trampling out the weeds by those vigorous plants that eradicate by trumping the weeds' insignificance.. so much sensual symbolism in this, I could rise like a new bloom. Effortlessly impeccable writing as always!

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and thoughts. I liked the journey to making the garden more beautiful. Your thoughts in the poem. Kind and hopeful. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

So beautiful. I hope you have the opportunity to tender her garden often