Quiet Love

This is a poem i've wrote , hope you like it ..

Quiet Love

Your over-lightening eyes will bright

And when time pass by

I will always be your love knight

With Those lightening Emeralds

Your the queen of the great light

That  immortalbritghtness never fade

Glowing in the darkness of this night

I love it when we are together

Taking the sweetest love flight

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For everytime we exchange looks

I believe our love will grow

Your lips on mine with a sweet kiss

So yeah , let the love flow

Baby i kept my love for you as a secret

But your eyes light is an arrow

Flashing in all my dark insides

Killing that despair shadow

Queen ,lets make everything crystal clear

Like your lovely eyes you know

Im surrounded by darkness in this world

With your eyes let the love glow

So i can only see you my angel

Please lets share love anyhow

In fact a sweet cuddle lemme feel yah’

And a deep kiss lemme taste yah’

Make this night last forever and ever

With a hair touch.....and then again to Quiet Love we go.....

 

 

Author's Note

i Hope you like this peom , thanks everyone !

Reviews

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Grammar, spelling, and punctuation issues aside, the deeper message of your poem is really nice. It's worthy of perfecting so that the message doesn't become lost within.

[Nizar]

i really will appreciate this , and if there are any mistakes just tell me ^^ :) thx !

[justdandy]

I enjoyed reading this. It has that medieval tone, that I really liked.

[Nizar]

Thank you ^^ i have so many others :)

[NinjaShadowWolf]

That is a really sweet poem. I'm not an expert in poems or romance, but I think you described romance in a very interesting, and beautiful way.

[Nizar]

i'm really thankful to you , thank you for your support Buddy ^^ and i'll be happy to post more thanks !

[Nizar]

Well this is my first poem that i publish in this website , i'll be posting more thanks for your support :)