That other place

The place of my dreams...

There's a place that I find sometimes in my dreams...
It makes me question which is the real world.
Because in my own world things make sense.
But in this world nothing makes sense.
So can you tell me what is more real?

There's a place I fall into without noticing it.
Where I can hear what you say...
And where I can feel the truth behind what I'm saying.

In this world the music plays backwards and it listens to you.
People hide their lies deep inside them and speak only what they mean.

There's a place that I often find myself wishing I could keep...

Author's Note

*shrug*

Reviews

[katyj]

I know this feeling so much, you expressed this so well.

[Shane Blackheart]

I created a place to get away to a long time ago, and I still like to go there when I need to escape the real world, so I feel you there. Very nice poem, those last few lines are definitely what I wish things were like, it would be so much nicer.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

i know what you mean...i have a place some where in my mind and it makes me think that nothing can go wrong

[Shadow in the Dark]

I also have a place like this were i want to often run to to have a few moments to myself and to stop all the noise going on.