I fell into something

I fell into something

A Poem by NoelAsh

Joe

You know I think of you everyday

I remember you everyday


I fish our memories out of the deepest ponds of my mind

gut them and fry them until the juices have dried

I wring out every bit of emotion and feeling


I listen to our song

I try to forget were I am, and who I'm with

and try to feel your touch again


I churn my stomach and wrench my heart

I rip myself apart from the inside out

searching for you there


I cant see you anymore, or feel you, smell you, taste you, hear you

and that drives me insane

inside out and twisted

© 2014 NoelAsh


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I like the story in the poem. You took the reader to good memories and missed places. I like the complete poem. The ending was my favorite. Some people make us want what we cannot have. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is beautiful. I really like.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very passionate write.
Joe should be proud of you.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is filled with so much sweetness and honesty.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

quietly a strong expression emotion , keep the good work

Posted 9 Years Ago



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