The world will see you

The world will see you

A Story by Nora
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As usual it's one of my crowd thoughts I am trying to motivate myself and people somehow

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Whatever the life hits you , rise again 
Every time you fall you should tell yourself that is not the end 
You will pick yourself up you will help yourself by yourself 
Whereas , we will not appreciate our smiles without our warm tears 
We will not appreciate our peace of mind without feeling the fear 
We will not appreciate our success without suffering from failures 
We will not appreciate our value of ourselves without some people failed us 
Even We will not appreciate the smell of our mother's cookies without smelling the musty 
But also we should know that all of these are temporary 
Our tears, our fears , our failures , even the musty smell 
All of them are temporary 
One day you will be 
The world will see you

© 2017 Nora


Author's Note

Nora
One day i will be famous and that story will be my famous quote 😂
( excuse me i am mad and ambitious ) 😁😢

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Another brilliant piece of truth from you. Despite the fact that you always seem to have something strident to say, each one of your pieces sounds quite different, & I like the way you mix it up, so you don't become a 1-trick pony, always making a strong point. You do a good job of picking a variety of different details to highlight here . . . pep talks in generalities are boring, but good details are what people can relate to. Also, the best thing about this is the way you use inclusive pronouns (us, we) . . . nothing is more off-putting than a piece that uses "you" as if the writer is telling the reader what the reader should do. It's always much better to include yourself & everyone in such a pep talk, that way it doesn't sound preachy. You've succeeded on all these points. (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Appreciate every single word of your review. Thank you, thank you a looooot
No you are certainly not, we back you...I loved it...:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


this is beautiful...i loved the encouragement this write gives to the reader and it's wonderful...keep writing girl!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much wajiha 😊😊
Wajiha Nayeem

6 Years Ago

my pleasure!!
An encouraging read...well penned :) x

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nora

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear 💕
some grammatical errors here and there but nonetheless, your writing made sense to me.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nora

6 Years Ago

Sorry for it i am not native speaker so please when you find grammatical errors tell me about it , t.. read more
this is very beautiful.. and everything you told are so true... i love your writings

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nora

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much dear , i appreciate it 💟💟

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