No land

No land

A Story by Nora
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It's kinda short , but read it anyway

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She is living in No land , where everything is destroyed ;
She has created to fight 
But out of the battlegrounds 
She is fighting for maintaining 
She is  fighting for completing 
She is  fighting for understanding 
She is fighting for even breathing. 

© 2017 Nora


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Nora
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A powerful and worthwhile poem. In our world of so many misplace and homeless people. The poem hold great meaning. Thank you Nora for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nora

6 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊
I am fighting breathe even after understanding the maintaining completion of this poem, heh... Penned between no-mans land and oblivion...

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is well written. You got good taste in choosing what words to fill the blanks. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thanks 😊😊😊😊
I can actually relate to this.."she is fighting for understanding"
Really well written !!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thanks pia 😊😊 i appreciate it
This is so beautiful. Says so much in few words

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much bella appreciate it :)
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CMC
I can tell I like something when I want to write something about it. This was to the point, and it had a powerful progression, "She is fighting for understanding, She is fighting for even breathing." Excellent.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words chris :)
CMC

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.
It seems like girl fighting for life, I loved the way you said it....:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nora

7 Years Ago

Thank you 😊😊 appreciate it 😀

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Added on May 18, 2017
Last Updated on May 18, 2017
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