High on Love

Burn me.
Feed me ecstasy.
Make my heart beat faster,
While my eyes roll back.
And you can-
Take me.
Pop me in your mouth like a pill;
Oh baby, I'd love that.
Intoxicate my brain with the scent of your hair,
I'm drunk on your beauty,
All I want to do is sit and stare.
And we can share the supply,
We won't see an end to this high.
Who said we couldn't be laced?
Cause obviously, that's a lie!
Our hands clench onto each other tighter than the bottles;
That we were sipping on when our hormones were first in full throttle.
Now that we're here, let me be blunt:
Cause you're gonna get me so blazed.
You're a beautiful life addition,
That alters my realities condition-
Into one that's euphoric,
Like morphine running through a needle's stick...
What can I say?
Darling, you've made me an addict.
There is no better feel than you on this whole planet.

Author's Note

Remember kids... drug free is the way to be!

Reviews

[James Paulin]

My first thoughts are wrapped up in the potency of the topic. Comparing drug use and sex is similar in basic cravings. I looked at the form of the poem and began to wonder if refining the piece into a double etheree would add an exquisite quality that sets it even further apart.

[Phibby Venable]

this is wonderful, well written, and the message of a natural high
and love very moving and true.

[AJChallenger]

This is an interesting piece. I enjoyed the concept of it, but it seems to dote on itself, which made me laugh a little while reading it.

I do like the way you rhyme, though, it shows experience.

[mystic soul]

well written piece... you have so beautifully brought out the similarity between drug and love... I do agree with you love too makes you an addict like drugs... This poem is unique in many ways. I really like it.

[R. L. Igmen]

romantic. kind of passionate as well. great job!

[Amy]

love it love is an adiction and i know it
great write

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Ren! this is truly envigorating, and dimensional
I love the addiction, though others may think it obessional
it is truly a love that only love birds and souls can really innate,
great write! ------mishel