Inspired

Okay. So my really talented friend, Claudia, is making a song and wants me to put a verse on it. This is what I wrote after hearing her verses and chrous...

It's not just your hips, I'm captivated by the sway of your intelligence.
The way you formulate like expert penmanship.
I'm in love with you, like a grammar freak loves perfect sentences.
Yes, I'm digging your language hottie...
Whether it be with your vocals or your Goddess like body.
My heart was a locked door, and your inspiration was the key,
That opened me to a new world, where there are no twists and curls.
I used to feel so clammed up, but now we're brighter than pearls.
We must have something chemical, cause you got me feeling high.
Do you feel the effect of the blaze when we lock eyes?
Now let's talk less, let me taste your lips,
We can scribble a happy ending for the rest of the script.
You got me writing with passion, my papers on fire,
But what we have will never run out of ink,
Cause your loves got me inspired.

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Good job. I love reading your writing that turn into songs. And since this is for someone else, I think it's pretty good!