Wanted: A hand to hold

A cool breeze that blows on by,
Reminding me of what I'm trying to find.
A soothing touch,
A lovely feel.
Seems invisible,
But I know it's real.
Told myself,
That I would know,
Passion like that, before I go.
Counting down the minutes,
And dreading the days-
That I try to find my way,
Out of this maze.
Looking for a beauty,
That'll last without being a lie,
Instead of the wrong paths,
Where we just say "goodbye."
Parting with negativity,
As if I didn't have plenty:
I want this to have more worth than any money!
So I walk on; the lonely streets.
Wondering if there's a stranger who feels like me?
I'm still hoping one day we'll meet,
Cuz' I don't wanna keep walking to the same ol' beat...
But if you're out there,
Please let me know.
Cause I got the love to share,
If you've got the hand to hold!

Reviews

[Rose Tyler]

Awwwwwwwww :)
Well written, has a nice flow to it. Makes me happy and sad all at once.
I love your writing!