She Deserves Better [Than You]

She Deserves Better [Than You]

A Poem by Chaos Complex
"

Girls shouldn't put up with a******s. You can do better.

"

It hits heavier than a hammer from a gun spanking a bullet.

Realizing that it was the one you loved to do it.

You blew it and she blew out your brains.

You're still recovering from this daze,

From after she set her tongue on taze.

There's a knife in your back as she walks away,

It feels like it's a good time to die today!

 

She's had enough of your bluffs and excuses.

She's moving on and you're just feeling useless.

You never took the time to shine for her,

So did you expect she'd sit around and endure?

She's got better things to do,Than live a life of boo-hoo's with you!

 

And can you blame her?

You did when you chained her!

When you made her feel like she had no worth,

When you treated her like she was nothing but dirt!

She's the best thing you ever had,

And you're never getting that back!

 

When she was sweet, you were sour.

You gave her s**t, when all she wanted was flowers.

She wanted happiness. You wanted power.

You hurt her, by talking like a coward.

Insulting her to cover your insecurities,

Now she's raking your truck with her car keys.

Middle finger to your face as you try to follow.

She might have a point:

"YOUR MOTHER SHOULD HAVE SWALLOWED!"

 

And can you blame her?

You did when you chained her!

When you made her feel like she had no worth,

When you treated her like she was nothing but dirt!

She's the best thing you ever had,

And you're never getting that back!

© 2010 Chaos Complex


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Girls need to learn not to fall for the a******s, but it seems they have to find out for themselves.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ren this is absolutely wonderful
its true I know way to many of my friends put up with a*****e boyfriends.
I love this as I love most of what you write
this is an awesome pice of writing. keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Chaos Complex
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I like to express my emotions and feelings in poetry. I write a lot of rap/hip hop stuff. I'm really vulgar. Deal with it. I don't get many reviews, but thank you to those who even bother to re.. more..

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