Changing Shape

Sometimes we stay drowning in what we think we lost for so long, that we miss what we still have because we are trying to see it through the same lens, instead of embracing it in a new way

Changing Shape:

 

I know I didn’t lose you, what we

Are just changed shape.

 

I can’t touch, but I feel you.

 

You can’t speak to me, but I hear you.

 

In my eyes I see yours

And in my spirit, I embrace you.

 

Reviews

[Cassie Fraga]

very strong with message... great read!!

This is perfect, and so wise, and true. I love the style of less words you used, within a great message, and meaning... But more important, shapes can change, memories stay. Excellent!

[Chris]

Several poems here...

I like the first one the best:

"I know I didn’t lose you, what we
Are just changed shape."

Chris

[Becky C Strukamp]

Nice one kiddo. This is a pretty powerful write. A short poem with a big powerful message. Excellent!!

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So well said and pondering as well. Nice write!

[Viper]

it's enough to drive a person crazy....to want what we can no longer have.

A lot was said in these few lines.

[November Gold]

You are so right Knighcall! I like that you saw that!

[knightcall]

Hmmm this to me suggests two people who love each other but no longer fit together on this earth. This poem could be intrepreted a lot of different ways, and that's a good thang.

[Lily Mae]

Perfectly said.. timeless words..x.x