Holding my Last Breath

Boy meets girl, You are my dream my world,

Although it's true,

On my own, I feel so alone

Although it's true, I'm still in love with you.

 

Sweet Rapture, forever more.

Safe inside myself, are all my thoughts of you.

Holding my last breath.

 

Nothing compares to a quiet evening alone with you.

Gimme a chance to see that you were made for me.

Sweet Rapture, It lies, here tonight.

 

Day and night, My love is real, my feelings pure.

One day you'll see it can happen to me.

I need a miricle, please let me be your man.

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Ignore grammar issues

Reviews

[BEEGE]

Good job pimp.
I think this was well written.
I think it had a real feeling with all
of that emotion poured into it.
Good stuff man.

BeegE

[Angel Baby]

Beautiful poem of love, very heartfelt...a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing.

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