Power

She smiles within the incline of a shadow
Silver lined eyes of judgment scope an unfamiliar form
The passing lift of a brow indicates further amusement
With the knowledge of what is to come

Blood tipped nails leave the familiar color in their wake
The unfamiliar form beckons to the call
Within the arched form of ache
She reaps the relinquished control

Author's Note

Comment as you please.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You said so much and open the door to a lot of mystery with this poem. I like the vision you create with your words. Woman always have the power. Some may not know. Men need to be seduced and controlled. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Suzy Q]

I love how you write. And I know my comments are short, but that could be because I'm young. And I understand what you're saying. I've just never experienced any of it, so I don't have personal experience to go off on. But never the less, you are an amazing writer.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend Chloe,
A very thought provoking write as usual. I looked up the word ache; I thought this definition added to your poems depth.

ache |āk|
noun
figurative an emotion experienced with painful or bittersweet intensity.

One of the best short poems I have read this year, an excellent job.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Calypso]

So simple and gory. Love it.

[Fabric Pulse]

Goodness, mysteriously vivacious! =]

[Layla J Omorose]

I agree with Coyote...there is definitely a lot of mystery in this poem...well done.

[quinfinn]

powerful and full of force. lustful and turbulent. expressive . emotive. complete and perfect balance. really good.

[Tasha]

this was seductive, but had so much mystery to keep the reader guessing. i loved the concept.

[E.V. Black]

Very seductive but enough mystery to keep the reader guessing.

[Sunni Davis]

You're words themselves are seductive and intriguing. I love the concept of this!