Perfectly stated! We all need to learn to just breath....we take upon ourselves to much stress & worries about life.....if we take your advice as through your creation here then all we need to do is just breath!
I really enjoyed this piece, short but so impacting & to the deep truth!
I like this. It's too the point and it's clear. I like the conciseness and the repetition. It flowed naturally. I understand that feeling of panic and not knowing if restraint is possible.
I like the words. The truth is. These are the words needed to bring peace and calm in a dangerous situation. A entertaining poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote
Perfectly stated! We all need to learn to just breath....we take upon ourselves to much stress & worries about life.....if we take your advice as through your creation here then all we need to do is just breath!
I really enjoyed this piece, short but so impacting & to the deep truth!