Sakura

Lonely Sakura,

High upon the mountain side,

Beauty all alone.

Author's Note

I need a name -_- What do you think?

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

She Dwelt Among the Untrodden Ways


She dwelt among the untrodden ways
Beside the spring of Dove;
A maid whom there were none to praise,
And very few to love.

A violet by a mossy stone
Half-hidden from the eye !
- Fair as a star , when only one
Is shining in the sky .

She lived unknown , and few could know
When Lucy ceased to be;
But she is in her grave , and , oh ,
The difference to me !

William Wordsworth

Just thought this fit you and your poem.

[G!o]

Short but really screaming piece. This is lovely and it is beautiful that you didn't need detailed information to pass the message. I love the name Lonely Sakura...that's what i'd choose it as the title since it is the gravity of the piece.

[Raven Starhawk]

This happens to be something detailed to perfection. I read each line, allow my mind to digest it and it is remarkable.

[Lina Grey]

The sakura is my favorite flower. This is some gorgeous penning, love, and fitting of the haiku format you chose. I love how you dressed the word Sakura in red, like the color of the real flower.
I would call it "Lonely Sakura" because I was taught that a haiku's name is the first line, but if you want something more creative, you could call it "Blooming Beauty". Thank you.

[Om Nom Ninja Sheep]

Oh, thanks! I really didn't think anybody would think it's that great! I didn't think it was good at all! Man, all of you guys made me feel special. c:

[luv2dream]

Pretty!