The cause

The cause

A Poem by Jean Carlos
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A small poem from a beginner.

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Some of my thoughts, some are deep some are not.

What is it that I have lost? Was it there or was it not.

Looking for something that seemed to be forgotten.

I had lost my way in a puzzle.

Ohhh!How much it hurts looking for that piece.

I can't ever seem to find it even when its next to me...

The shadows of its smile never seem to leave me, for I have been hurt and no one seems to believe me.

As her smile shines forever more brightly, the darkness just keeps taking over me.

Aha! The pain was always you.

You who left me stranded with no choice to choose.

© 2016 Jean Carlos


Author's Note

Jean Carlos
This is actually my first poem and I enjoyed doing it, I will gladly accept any type of advice.

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"Looking for something that seemed to be forgotten"- great line, love it

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jean Carlos

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it.

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Added on April 3, 2016
Last Updated on April 3, 2016
Tags: romance, drama, sadness, abandoned

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Jean Carlos
Jean Carlos

No man's land, Puerto Rico, Puerto Rico



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My goal is to increase my ability in writing and reading overall. The few days I have been on this site have been great. I enjoy reading other people's work and can relate to them. I am currently a.. more..

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