A QUIET MIND

Those bipolar thought tsunamis!

AA QUIET MIND
 

A quiet mind, with all respect, Has never been my friend. I'm always thinking, planning too... The clamor never ends! A setting sun marks time for me. That's when the fun begins! A word tsunami floods my mind Like rushing mighty winds! The pen cannot write fast enough, To keep up with my thoughts. I run to my computer That my son so sweetly bought. Arthritic fingers can't keep up... And in the light of day, I see the written words asleep... They don't know what to say. ~~

QUIET MIND 

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

if we lose those thoughts before we can get them on paper, it is so frustrating....and i relate to his...my mind works too fast, non-stop and at all hours of the night i am getting because of the muse.

she never sleeps so she never lets me sleep...and brings me thoughts at most awkward times when i cannot get to a keyboard or pad.

[Miss Sharon]

I SO hear you Jacob! Why is it the muse is most active during the hours when we 'shoul be' sleeping? Thanks for the nice relational comment. ~Sharon

[child of God]

Beautiful poem I am not the best reviewer out there but I like this poem it speaks to me I feel I relate to it my mind goes 90 miles a minute sometimes thank you for sharing it was a pleasure to read
Broken girl

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your beautiful and kind remarks! No need to worry about what you say in a comment. A writer just wants to know if people enjoyed their post! Thanks again. ~Sharon

[~]

Ahhh :) I totally can identify with this. My thoughts, the speed of light cannot be captured so easily by any poem or rant. :)

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for your kind remarks on this write! It is appreciated muchly! ~Sharon