IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT

IN THE DARKNESS OF THE NIGHT

......

Overwhelm me with your love

Set my lips on fire

Hold me in the morning light

You're my hearts desire

Cradle me in loving arms

Whisper in my ear

Leave me never all alone

When the moon appears

Keep me ever unto thee

Like a gentle prayer

In the darkness of the night

Darling...I'll be there

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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

The best things happen in the "darkness of the night"A love tryst with two people who dearly commingle...respect and care for each other...no one wants to be alone when the moon peeks out...it's so romantic, one needs a lover to entwine, to cuddle under its beams....your words are lovely Sharon and I like the structure of the poem as well...NICE!
Warmly, B

[Miss Sharon]

You always make me feel like a "real writer." Thanks so much for your kindness! ~Sharon

[Betty Hermelee]

Dear Sharon: you ARE a real writer! and you're very welcome
Warmly, B

[Miss Sharon]

(((HUGS)))

[Betty Hermelee]

Hugs back at you!
Warmly, B

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful and very romantic.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you very much for your kind words. ~Sharon

[Ken Simm.]

Elegant and erotic set in just the right language.

[Miss Sharon]

What a lovely review! thanks so much. ~Sharon

[Desert Knave]

A most beautiful romantic write. Nicely done. ~Jim

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Jim! Always a pleasure to "see" you. ~Sharon

[Soren]

"Keep me ever unto thee
Like a gentle prayer"
I loved these two lines. A very romantic piece.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your kind review! ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful love poem dear Sharon. Passionate and loving in its content. How could he refuse? Flows so well. Have a lovely weekend.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Awww! Thanks so much Chris for your kindness. ~Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

So romantic and so passionate; any man should be lucky to answer the call, to live love to the fullest.

[Miss Sharon]

What a nice review Sami! Thank you so much. ~Sharon

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome Miss Sharon.

[emmajoygreen]

Beautiful language, beautiful thoughts.. and love divine start to finish, Miss Sharon. Could be a Time-long Valentine's quote. Exceptional, sincere and subtle.

'Cradle me in loving arms
Whisper in my ear
Leave me never all alone
When the moon appears.'

Not a jot of demand but gentle and clear invitation.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much sweetie for a beautiful review! ~Sharon

[emmajoygreen]

Sending you smiles and best wishes. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Your romantic writes sizzle. But, with such good taste, demurely you hint and gently touch.
j.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much Jacob! You are appreciated my friend. ~Sharon