MOON VIEWING

A haiku for the contest...

creatures of the night
gather 'round the pond
moon viewing

Reviews

[613]

I got a really creepy vibe from this. But it worked somehow! Nice work.

- Brittney


I'd really appreciate it if you would check out my novel, HIM. (:

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for the review. ~Sharon

[Miss Sharon]

English haiku does not need to conform to the Japanese 5,7,5 syllable count because of the difference in our languages. As long as the total syllables in the write does not contain more than 17 syllables it is permissible.

[~]

a dark yet beautiful write. I like your creative spirit :D

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you very much my fellow wordsmith! ~Sharon

[mattavelli]

Nice image. I've always stuck to the 5-7-5. Makes for a fun puzzle for me to write.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for a nice review mattavelli! ~Sharon