FOREVER ENTWINED

FOREVER ENTWINED

A Poem by Miss Sharon
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A simple poem of love.

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FOREVER ENTWINED

with words you have gained my attention
With your eyes you have captured my soul
With a song you're my reason for being
With love you have made my life whole

By design of the gods I'm held captive
To calls of your voice on the wind
Whenever you're near I am speechless
And helpless my love to rescind

Forever entwined by your myst'ry
And softly embraced by your charms
My life has been changed...and I'm grateful
The world cannot do to me harm
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© 2021 Miss Sharon


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i like your comment "A simple poem of love" .. and it is just that .. reading renews my belief in it .. it's so easy .. but so complex as it grows .. what i especially like is how your poem creates this cradle of strength, assurance and warmth and then your protagonist simply lays back into it .. this paints an enviable relationship says i .. very comforting and inspiring to read .. flow and rhymes so natural i hardly notice and reach the last verse too soon :)
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Wowser! Thank you ever so much my friend for a wonderful review of this write. I appreciate you more.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

its a gem says i! "entwined" is a great word when it involves true caring for one another ..



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dearest Ms Sharon... a lovely Poem overflowing with Charm...
A love ❤️ that is easy on the eyes and will protect you from Harm. Hope your Summer brings Warmth to your Soul. tenderly, Pat

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much for your beautiful review. I appreciate you. ~Sharon
Such a beautiful piece.
I loved everything word.
Nicely donee

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

2 Weeks Ago

You are much too kind! And I love it . Thank you. ~Sharon
Hello, Sharon! :)
Of course this is lovely. I won't hold my breath waiting for my wife to write a poem for me. Haha
You have a lucky man. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you so much my friend! You are appreciated. ~Sharon
i like your comment "A simple poem of love" .. and it is just that .. reading renews my belief in it .. it's so easy .. but so complex as it grows .. what i especially like is how your poem creates this cradle of strength, assurance and warmth and then your protagonist simply lays back into it .. this paints an enviable relationship says i .. very comforting and inspiring to read .. flow and rhymes so natural i hardly notice and reach the last verse too soon :)
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Wowser! Thank you ever so much my friend for a wonderful review of this write. I appreciate you more.. read more
Einstein Noodle

1 Month Ago

its a gem says i! "entwined" is a great word when it involves true caring for one another ..
I cannot do this...write this kind of love poetry...
pulls at the heartstrings...enormously expressive.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Thanks so much Jacob for your kind words my friend. You are appreciated my friend. ~Sharon
A lyrical love poem....filled with the reasons romance poetry will never die! Beautiful! Lydi**

Posted 2 Months Ago


Miss Sharon

1 Month Ago

Awwwwwwwww! Thanks so much Lydi. You are such a dear friend and are muchly appreciated! ~Sharon

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Added on April 14, 2021
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My name is Sharon, I am a retired piano teacher, I love the mountains where I hike and snowshoe, have had several poems published and love to write. I also love to read almost anything I can get my ha.. more..

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