MAKING ROOM

Christmas in the eyes of a child.

MAKING ROOM

My mommy read a story

About a little King.

His birth was so amazing,

It made the angels sing!

His mommy rode a donkey...

There weren't any cars.

Some shepherds saw a miracle

That shined up in the stars!

But...something made me very sad

About the story read.

There wasn't any room for Him,

Not even one small bed.

Then I began to think if I

Could help in any way.

A King should have a real nice room...

Without that smelly hay!

I know what I will do for Him,

Then I will have a part.

I'll make a special room for Him...

Right here within my heart!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY JESUS!

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Reviews

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a wonderful tribute to the baby Jesus. I enjoyed reading this.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you very much my friend! I appreciate you. ~Sharon

[Chris Shaw]

An endearing write about the Christmas story from the perspective of a small child. There can be wisdom where there is innocence. Delightfully written my talented poetry friend.

Chris

[Miss Sharon]

Thanks so much Chris for your very nice review! ~Sharon

[Gee]

What a gem of a Christmas poem and a quite lovely closing stanza ;)))

[Miss Sharon]

Awwwwwwwwww! Thanks so much Gee. ~Sharon

[Davidgeo]

Everyone should have that stink.

Jesus should smell like everyone, everyone should smell like jesus.

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you for your review. Merry Christmas. Sharon

[Davidgeo]

My pleasure, doll face

[Desert Knave]

Quite the beautiful Christmas write. ~Jim

[Miss Sharon]

How nice to hear from you my friend! Thank you for the review. Merry Christmas to you! ~Sharon

[K writes]

This is so wonderful , enjoyed this write a lot

[Miss Sharon]

Thank you so much for the nice review! Merry Christmas to you. ~Sharon