can't live without her

can't live without her

A Poem by OokamiTenshi

can't live without her

she's buried herself too deep for her to leave now

sets my soul to weep

I've never found a love such as hers

a love to mach my own

she's the one I can't live without

she's the one I will die for

I love her too much to see her go

can't let it happen not again

to fall from this one means death itself

never to wake never to move just to sleep

I will not live to see another day of suffering

to wait for one that will never compare

she holds the key of my life and to give it back

means to end for me some call it drama

some say it's not worth it

but I've suffered too much to take more bullshit

she gose I go nothing more or less

she's the only one I want to caress

without her life is nolonger a acceptable place 

never again will I look at a face

never again I will love if she goes

for her leaving means the begining of sorrow. 

© 2009 OokamiTenshi


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Beautiful words. One can feel your pain in them.

I did notice one little oops: "a love to mach my own" I'm guessing you wanted to say 'Match' here. Other then that this is perfect. I loved the way you express that the lose of her love is the death of you. Beautiful.



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